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Viewing Life Through Lens

a traveller in wanderlust can’t blink her eyes on the splendor of the place where she passes by with a dreamy feeling she alights from her ride gazes in gape to the marvelous beauty of a paradise ambling along the green fields with bright flowers and yew trees on the side is a gray mountain standing tall in glory various birds hover above stretching their wings some animals graze on nearby spring colorful insects fly together in shapes of ring taking a halt in every minute to capture all angles with her lens in billowing skirt, once in a while sways and turns around with grace heading gladly at the other end where a jungle awaits unaware of other animals , some are wild and some are tame while wondering and looking over yonder she holds her lens, so eager to see what’s in there a mother and baby monkey beckon with a clever grin heart being captivated by nature’s enchantment feeling agog, she gets in aghast! two lions stare just in front of her one looks so kind and the other one is cruel despite her fear, she tries to capture them with her lens before running away, two caretakers dressed up like Tarzan and Jane show up saying, “Thank You Come Again.” Nov. 25,2012 by: Leonora Galinta First Place Contest Theme: Viewing Life Through Lens Contest Judged: 12/3/2012 Sponsor: Poet SandyIvy D
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Davis Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:53 PM
Leonora Such a creative, interesting, descriptive write. The imagery allows the reader to be right there looking at this beautiful scene with you. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Single Mom poem.
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Leonora. Love Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 1:14 AM
Congratulations on your win with this piece of magic Leonora xx
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. Excellent!
Sefunmi Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:42 AM
What an interesting write! Really enjoyed reading this. Congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:14 AM
congrats Leonora on a magnificent write and first place win my friend .. well deserved .. thankxx for soupmail however am having problems sending replies to anyone luv ..sorry .. hope u understand dear ..
Liwayway Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:06 AM
Congrats dear Norie on your grand win!!! so happy for you. God bless you always! mwuah!!!!!!!
Harper Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 8:41 PM
A privilege to read this winning poem, quite the exciting excursion into the wild, through the lens of the photographer! Makes me think of so many safaris!
Roberts Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Congrats. Leonora really enjoyed the read....from another libra girl....Seren
May Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:20 PM
congrats on your super win Leonora...
Guzzi Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Nice one hon I LOVE a good long meaty write...[you know I don't really care for short writes ;)] congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Widjanarko Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:33 PM
Congrats on your win Leonora :D they are gorgous as always :D
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December 3, 2012 at 6:07 PM
wow... I missed this poem... :-( it makes me sad to have missed it... anyhow.. I am glad to see it on the winners list.. forgive me for not paying attention... sis-ie-pooh... I guess we Libra-Chicks have the same like.. cuz.. it is a #1 in my book...love the view... through your lens... . :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE....Leonora. ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda
Ivy D Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 4:25 PM
Cngrats Libramate :-) Sandy
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:55 PM
oh, you added a funny twist at the end of this one, sweetie. That was cute! I really felt the "Jungle" in this nice write for the contest.
Horsman Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 5:05 AM
this is both lovely and amazing...
Andresen Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 3:33 PM
The most beautiful poem I've read today, Leonora!!!!! - I wish you a peaceful Sunday afternoon / evening. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 9:13 AM
Wow!! I can visualize your poem my dear friend Norie...so beautifully written...Good luck always and thanks always for your unending support on my poems..God bless you always!! (^_^)
Widjanarko Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Such an adventure poem, I love the Tarzan and Jane part, it successfully made me smile :), good luck too for your contest, this is a great masterpiece, and thank you for your lovely comment in my piece, it's really delight my day :D- Hug, Yanny
Falotico Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Your a wonderful poet and storyteller.. and your comments on mine made me smile bright... luv n hugs all day for you.... Michael
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 6:38 AM
WOW! Enjoyed this poem with the surprise ending. That was very good.
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Great scene that you have painted with your words..I could just see this going on...Great rhythm and flow to your work..Thanks for the recent visits to my work..Sara
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