View From the Second Comet - Act 1

Out of its axis
In negative spin
Our planet we call earth
Is diminishing

Three days earlier
A comet struck home
From the black of the universe
On its trajectory roam

The world as normal
Went about its day
Parents worked
While their children played
 
We had heard before
That a comet may strike
But the observatory in Hawaii
Said we were well out of its sight

But unknown to us all
It had split into two
The smallest section
Towards us flew

As it broke from the main body
In its twisted break
Its angle changed
We now just await

On the day of the impact
Half the world was asleep
While the other half
Were already in weep

It struck a volcano
Near the Indian Ocean
As fissures opened
In lava spewed motion

As we watched on the news
We could hardly believe
Our planet being obliterated
Will we have time to grieve

On CNN
A report comes in
The shuttle Liberty is following
As the second part of the comet spins

It too has changed
Its trajectory course
To our planet it heads
For now we all, fear the worst

Presidents, Prime Ministers
Are all on the phone
Asking, What can we do
To stop this destructive roam?




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Very compelling narrative, James. Can't wait to read the second part! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 6:57 AM
On to Act 2. Lainie
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October 27, 2009 at 5:09 PM
Nice use of slant and traditional rhyme. The short lines give this piece a fast pace which works well with the action. I agree with Sara. This is such a creative poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 1:57 PM
Aren't we glad that its not true. For if it was we would all be blue.There is always that possiblility but thank God that he is the keeper of the universe and it won't happen unless he wills it. Keep writing. Sara
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