Vietnamese Restaurant

VIETNAMESE      RESTAURANT

 
September afternoon in Saigon,
Delicately-embroidered decorative 
Cloth-pieces on furniture, 
From the French imperial era. 
Scary African wood-carvings,
And my little girl frightened  to even  look 
At some of  the wooden masks. 
Table in the near dark:  a comfort away from
The glaring heat  of the street.
Warm damp air wafting in from the delta filled 
With fragrances of all sorts of fruit, 
Some from local farms  -  huge strawberries 
And luscious raspberries,  and  sunny bananas.
Some from much further afield, the promise of
Oranges from Brazil and mangoes from  Cayenne. 
Coffee being brewed and drunk  in  adjacent cafes 
Was an additional reason for us to sniff the breeze deeply. 
From inside,  lip-licking aromatic hints
Of Vietnamese deep-fried food filled our nostrils. 
Our hunger dissolved in the intoxication of wok-steamed pineapples,
Made us ravenous to explore  the small dishes on offer. 
Delicate French bowls and delicate delta prawns,
And small fried rolls of fish, unidentifiable  but mouth-juicy: 
All fingers had to be licked repeatedly 
To get the last drop of flavor,
Giving  her  Dutch-courage to peep at the masks 
Through tightly-closed  fingers over her eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/3/2011 8:46:00 PM
Nice image Sydney, enjoyed different view from your pen~Skat
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:21:00 PM
Nice description of the restaurant in Saigon, beautifully worded, Sydney
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Date: 2/2/2011 2:17:00 PM
You describe the interior of this restaurant so vividly and what a treat it must have been for you and your little girl to dine there. (A former beau once gave me a black tribal mask for Christmas. Still don't know what he was thinking, but it went downhill from there.) Nicely penned, Syd! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2011 1:12:00 PM
this vietnamese restaurant comes vividly to life in this very well written poem - love it
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