Vietnam Quatrain

Within my breast I carry ancient death; 
Its face is pale and white as marbled clay. 
Consumed with guilt, I struggle for each breath 
Still sour with napalm death of yesterday. 

The fractured colors formed behind my lids 
Are monumental rainbows round a pit 
Where hues of crimson-reds crisscross the grids 
Profuse in bloody lines and squares to fit. 

Profanely perfect patterned memories 
Of riddled bodies huddled on the ground, 
Where bloated skin slips off fatalities 
As ragged maggots slither-squirm around. 

The jungle flora breathes forth mystic sighs 
As soldiers wander through symbology. 
They see suspended phantoms' floating eyes; 
A catapult to horrid memory. 

No temple of communion colonnades! 
No transubstantiation in the heat! 
No priestly servants hidden in the glades! 
No promises of paradise wrapped neat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Terry Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 3:03 PM
Tom, you must be a Vietnam vet. You have captured the horror of that war precisely. Being a woman and Russian voice intercept op during that conflict, I wasn't there. I wrote a poem called "One Master" out of guilt for not serving along side my fellow soldiers in Vietnam. It is unsettling to read of a hell experienced first hand. You have brought the war to all of us. Deep, indeed. Jan
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January 17, 2013 at 8:48 AM
My brother is a decorated disabled Navy Corpsman. My other brother and I have 56 years active and reserve time between us. I liked this one. It touches home.
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October 18, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Tom:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
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September 18, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Excellent work! Terry
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Tom. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:36 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work.Great job..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Raw power, anger, hurt pain...and yet it seems unfinished to me..I think you have more to say..though a hard topic to read of a necessary one! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Wow, one of the really really good ones here I am seeing!! Excellent words chosen in this poem. Great alliteration and rhythm. Congrats on the HM. I love the topic too.
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July 29, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Congrats on your awesome win. love phyl
Williams Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Tom, congratulations on your International win...David
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Tom. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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