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Victory Scar


Victory Scar

That long line still shows.
Thirty years a part of me;
precancer they said.
Hysterectomy so young;
lifesaving victory scar.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Beautiful Scars
Contest Sponsor: Laura Urbaniak
Judged: 11/24/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 28, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love SKAT
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November 29, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 2:47 PM
A double victory, Sandra! A life-saving scar that should serve as encouragement to many others. Congratulations:) // paul
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so much, Paul. Sandra
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November 26, 2015 at 4:01 AM
Congrats on ur win with this poem Sandra.. great work!
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra
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November 25, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much, Janice. Hugs, Sandra
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November 25, 2015 at 7:53 AM
A worthy win from every angle, Sandra, many congratulations. Viv x
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much, Viv. Hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Sandra, I just stopped to say congratulations on your 1st place win. You trully deserved the top spot:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. Hugs, Sandra
Selfa Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 11:39 PM
This is great! Congratulations for the win!!! :) -hansteven
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much, Hansteven Selfa. Sandra
Kayode Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 10:55 PM
This is a hit,congrats on the win Sandra...hugs
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thank you so much, Kayod5. Hugs, Sandra
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 10:12 PM
short but the brevity is strong! congrats for the top win, Sandra! =`)~Olive Eloisa
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November 28, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Olive. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 8:42 PM
What a great write! Congratulations on your win!
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November 28, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Sandra, heartiest congratulations on your first placement! Love, Balveen
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:31 PM
In a few short, poetic sentences, you really expressed your "victory scar" well, Sandra! Congrats on your top win :)
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Sandra - my poem is also about cancer:-( hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Jan, thank you so much for your visit and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
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November 24, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Congrats on your well deserved 1st place in my first contest! It was wonderful reading your poem. Thank you :)-lu *smiles*
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November 24, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Sandra, your poem just rang so easily in my crazy brain! The flow and what you expressed in such few words made an impact that I don't think I've ever felt. Plus you've opened my horizons about short poems (haiku, tanka). Such few words for you to express your emotions...Thank you again, always, Laura
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November 24, 2015 at 6:41 PM
Laura, I enjoyed participating in your contest. Thank you so much for finding my poem worthy of the nice placement! I really appreciate it and look forward to your future contests. Hugs, Sandra
Meade Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Whenever you can defeat or prevent cancer it is indeed a sweet victory -- the Scar gives testimony to this win!
Haight Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Yes, David. Thank you for your visit and positive comment. Much appreciated. Sandra
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November 19, 2015 at 10:35 AM
I truly applaud you for this. Much, much respect. Powerful lines.
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November 22, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Thanks, Drake. So nice of your to visit and leave your encouraging comment. Sandra
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