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VICTORY

There was silence across the land People had been forced indoors By the fear of living in the dark On a thick black sky Appeared multitudinous tiny stars They seemed to be helpless Defeated by the seemingly undefeatable darkness Then from a shadowed horizon far east Ascended an angel, the moon Her garment pure white as snow She rose up very slowly and confidently And fought bravely against darkness Until he was reduced to ruins And suddenly all over the place Started a hullabaloo of cheerful fowls The death of silence across the land Declared her victorious The moon an artist; painted the sky in white Carved the world into casted shadows Her victory melted fear away in the dying night And made the world look romantic instead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/25/2010 11:08:00 AM
love the last line, inspirational Tumelo
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:00:00 AM
Like the imagism Bojosi.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:53:00 AM
This is a tremdous write , great insight into my favs box thanks Daniel
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:45:00 PM
A wonderful poem full of beauty "her garment pure white as snow" many enchanting lines you give us to ponder.. and thanks for your comment on my poetry and welcome to the soup...
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Date: 1/23/2010 5:24:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view in this poem. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:10:00 AM
The moon in all her glory.. Lovely word picture of her welcome in the sky. ..Margaret
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:12:00 AM
A beautiful poem here, enjoy ya night
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Date: 1/21/2010 5:53:00 PM
I really love this description you've given...wonderful poem...Marty
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Date: 1/21/2010 1:20:00 PM
The light and hope that faith bring to our lives is well captured in this imaginative poem, Bojosi. I see you are relatively new on poetry soup, so let me extend my welcome. Hope to read more of your work! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2010 1:07:00 PM
This seems very fantastical. Great images. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Bojosi. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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