Victorian House

On a broad street 'neath spreading sycamores sits a stately dwelling.
Its elegance and surrounding grounds are so very compelling.
Gracious gardens and towering pines enhance its wide expanse,
All girded by a charming, yet sturdy, white iron picket fence.

Gingerbread ornamentation adorns its every eave and gable.
At the rear of the house stands a horse and carriage stable.
In my minds-eye I sit upon its front porch, so very inviting,
To muse upon its past and what made life there so exciting.

I see eloquent ladies and gentlemen arriving for a gala affair,
Happily anticipating the fellowship that awaits them there.
Outside huge flakes of snow waft gently to the earth,
But inside a blazing fire welcomes them to its cozy hearth.

The grandfather clock in the hall intones its sonorous chimes.
For decades it has dwelled there, overseeing happy times.
In the parlor a grand pump organ reposes by yon wall,
If only it could speak, what special memories it might recall!

The house has weathered the ravages of time with exquisite grace,
Providing warmth and comfort, when life moved at a slower pace.
Built to last for generations, built when guild took pride;
There, generations of genteel folk, loved, laughed and cried!

Entry for Nayda Ivette Negron's "Enchanted House" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Flower Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:02 PM
I like the flow and the rhyme. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Congratulations, Robert!
Negron Flores Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations Robert on the placement of the contest
Hinshaw Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Dear Nayda: thank you so much for considering my entry in your contest worthy of a win! Bob H
Novotny Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:21 PM
Exceptionally fine craftsmanship in these words Robert. Very glad I took time to search this out. And I love the feel this one has. Bravo - Chuck
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations Robert on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Awesome in imagery, not just sights but also sound. and "feeling." LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 9:37 AM
The flow, the rhyme and the shape sublime. Many congratulations Robert on your win in Catie's fine contest. Your on a roll my man >> James
Gorelick Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 9:12 AM
As usual, your poem went stright to my heart. Congrats to you my dear friend..you are certainly building up quite a resume! lol BG
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Thank you for sharing your fantastic poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Robert. Always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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