Victoria

Victoria, queen, as a youngster quite lean, had nine children and grew rather fat, but Albert and John Brown both loved her like that! for Andrea's clerihew contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2019 4:14:00 PM

I have read your short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/3/2019 2:51:00 PM

You'll have to introduce me to the Browns. LOL Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2019 2:42:00 PM

aha, you did Victoria. I found this so cute. Not hilarious, but a bit funny and with succinct lines. WELL DONE and Congrats, Jack. I guessed wrong that you were the one who did Henry 8. haha!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/27/2019 4:36:00 PM

Quite a woman that one was..brilliant Jack, love it.

Constance La France

Date: 1/24/2019 3:48:00 PM

Jack, good one for the contest, best of luck ~

Paul Callus

Date: 1/23/2019 4:14:00 PM

Excellent! No wonder a statue of John Brown is to be found in Balmoral! Brown's relationship with the Queen will always remain a subject of great speculation!! Regards // paul

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/22/2019 5:02:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, Jack! I love great clerihews and this is a GREAT ONE! So sorry to hear about your Mum. I'll remember you both in my prayers.Seems like the golden years are not all they are supposed to be. I'm not sure you are aware my Vera passed in July. She had Parkinsons disease and dementia is a part of that. Glad you liked What Did You Do In the War, Daddy. Bob

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2019 4:05:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for stopping by. Sara