Victims In Victory Seen Through Their Eyes

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The Battle Of Sharqat was the last battle fought in the Mesopotamian Campaign between Anglo-Indian forces and Ottoman soldiers. For some it was one battle too many and somehow the fighting has never stopped since then...

Victims In Victory Seen Through Their Eyes


The two were brothers unlikely ones so they had been told by their 

Heteronormative leaders marching in confidence to monochromatic

Repetitive bugles of one-sidedness’ strides one-sightedness’ quest 

Occidental Oriental obedience to some Major some God or other led

Usurpers to an unusual display of sameness at the end when they left
                               
Geopolitical pawns both Barrett (The Quarrelsome)and Youssuf

Heeding Allah (Piety Power and Influence) stood firm until the end


The scene of their parties was Mesopotamia just north of Bagdhad

His Majesty The King and the Ottoman Sultan had come to agree to

Enter the resting of weapons ceasefire and armistice had been set

In his mind Youssuf prayed to Allah and Barrett reached for a brandy and smoke

Reprieve and behold they would return in one piece from the trenches


Ending the battle they finally exchanged compliments and Barrett and

Youssuf each had a bayonet stuck through one of their eyes minutes before 

Evening rested that one day of too many long days 1918 in October 

Sharqat and the battle thereof was over and the men were the lucky ones


08th October 2016 and the battle has resumed Through Many Different Eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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