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Victim Or Victor

Sometimes in your side is the painful thorn At some other time you will bloom in rose There are times when almost all hues are torn And also times when you rest in repose Though upset by a story in a mess The rose always stays a wonderful rose What in fact matters to us in a race In any event is still how you pose This is why very often a victim Even in his crush can find a rainbow Instead of being sad and languishing Unfolds his self like a striking fresco So long I am in the shade of your touch Victor or victim does not matter much __________________________________________ 14/9/2016

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Date: 10/11/2016 3:37:00 AM
No matter what life throws at you, love will always be your shield and your defender. It has been mine over the years on the battlefield of life. Great write Probir. Enjoyed it. God Bless. D.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/11/2016 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Dave ...
Date: 9/21/2016 4:38:00 PM
Love is grand. Congratulations Probir.
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Date: 9/22/2016 12:11:00 AM
Of course love is grand ... Thanks Janis ...
Date: 9/21/2016 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/22/2016 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, Nayda ...
Date: 9/14/2016 9:26:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet good luck in the contest!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/22/2016 12:14:00 AM
Thank you .... Sorry for the inadvertent delay ... What you wished has happened ... And thank you once again ....
Date: 9/14/2016 11:38:00 AM
This is the "grandeur d'ame"in true love!Enjoyed it.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thank you ...

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