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Vicious Cycle

I cant stand you, I love you You make me laugh You've seen me cry But all that we have is honestly a lie You're in love with her I'm in love with you Sadly It's true I'm part of this vicious cycle I'm here She's not Is it that hard to choose Pick me I promise you wont have anything to loose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/21/2012 11:16:00 PM
Oooh! I hope he picks you! I love this style you have of expressing your personal feelings... it's like you're venting. I like it!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/14/2012 1:57:00 PM
Wish you all the best Elizabeth. Very well done poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/14/2012 1:36:00 AM
Elizabeth, a heartfelt cry..David
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