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Vibrant and Fleet

Blue sea chased the shore
as colorful boats went by,
through diamond sparkles.
Coarse, gold sand feels great sometimes,
when teal sky is in the sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Horsman Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 7:16 AM
teal sky meets the sea, love the tanka, Harry.
Buehler Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Glad you liked it, Harry. Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 8:02 PM
Beautiful picture-poem combo, Evelyn. Really hits the spot in summertime! Thanks, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 9:19 PM
You are very welcome, Gershon. Thank you for your upbeat remarks. :D
Buhagiar Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 12:55 AM
I'll always admire your descriptions.
Buehler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 11:55 AM
That is very nice to know. Thank you. :)
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