Vibrant and Fleet

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Blue sea chased the shore as colorful boats went by, through diamond sparkles. Coarse, gold sand feels great sometimes, when teal sky is in the sea.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/12/2022 7:16:00 AM

teal sky meets the sea, love the tanka, Harry.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/12/2022 11:35:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Harry. Thank you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2022 8:02:00 PM

Beautiful picture-poem combo, Evelyn. Really hits the spot in summertime! Thanks, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/11/2022 9:19:00 PM

You are very welcome, Gershon. Thank you for your upbeat remarks. :D

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/11/2022 12:55:00 AM

I'll always admire your descriptions.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/11/2022 11:55:00 AM

That is very nice to know. Thank you. :)