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Green born out Of melancholy— Heavy trees

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Date: 6/22/2024 7:38:00 PM
Emotive! Great imagery, Paige!
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Date: 6/19/2024 8:01:00 PM
Very nice. I especially like this ku of yours!
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Date: 6/19/2024 2:17:00 PM
Nice one...
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Date: 6/18/2024 4:28:00 PM
a master piece, thanks yann
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:42:00 AM
This is a metaphoric delight born in nature's imagery, Paige. So good! Blessings of light to you! Thumbs up!
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Date: 6/18/2024 8:08:00 AM
Great haiku, so much said.
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Date: 6/18/2024 12:29:00 AM
What a cute and creative haiku: speaks volumes, especially “ heavy trees” feels like a metaphor for something deeper! You always have your unique way of expressing! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light
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