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VEXILLUM angel stood disconnected once-white spikes muddy scarlet as if an escutcheon drowned his form disbanded his blade dumped damaged discarded discernments cast downward with edges shifting, doubted mercifulness oriflamme yearning whilst every ward defied 3rd Place contest winner Written: July 28, 2022 NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/2/2022 11:49:00 AM
Is it related to any mythology?
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:25:00 PM
Though I didn't understand much, I know it is something remarkably profound ! Congratulations on your podium win, dear friend !
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:29:00 PM
Back with congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:20:00 AM
Very creative Lasaad! Your alliteration adds to the drama of your words especially if spoken like a Greek tragedy. Have to admit I headed to the dictionary! Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings.
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Date: 7/30/2022 8:48:00 AM
Poignant and powerful! Kudos on your podium win in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 7/29/2022 9:30:00 AM
Reads like one that Brian will find needs to be on his winners list. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2022 5:32:00 AM
Powerful vocabulary!
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Date: 7/28/2022 11:56:00 PM
Much thought behind this poem.
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