Vexillum

VEXILLUM

angel stood

disconnected

once-white spikes 
muddy scarlet

as if an escutcheon
drowned his form
disbanded
his blade
dumped
damaged
discarded 

discernments
cast downward
with
edges shifting,
doubted mercifulness 

oriflamme yearning

whilst
every ward
defied 

3rd Place contest winner

Written: July 28, 2022

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Zahid Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Is it related to any mythology?
George Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 9:25 PM
Though I didn't understand much, I know it is something remarkably profound ! Congratulations on your podium win, dear friend !
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:29 PM
Back with congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Very creative Lasaad! Your alliteration adds to the drama of your words especially if spoken like a Greek tragedy. Have to admit I headed to the dictionary! Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings.
Calasibetta Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Poignant and powerful! Kudos on your podium win in the contest. :)Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Reads like one that Brian will find needs to be on his winners list. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Pandit Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Powerful vocabulary!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 11:56 PM
Much thought behind this poem.
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