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VETERANS DAY

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 11 NOVEMBER 2011, MY PICTURE, (c)

Veterans Day

Oh you blessed souls

That

For us have fallen,

We wish 

The loftiest of appreciations for your sacrifice to show 

By

Thanking you for the opportunity given to us

To

Enjoy the greatest gift of all

Wich 

You have missed:

LIFE!*









(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
     11 November 2016


* John: 15:13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breedt Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Oh Demetrios I always look forward to your work. This haltingly written poem is in step with the slow march for the fallen. Your flowers is shouting the joy of life. Congrats on your placement thus far
Stover Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Wonderful powerful poem. Brought tears to my eyes. My grandma's brother was blown up in Germany during WWII 2 weeks before his 20th birthday. My great-grandma never got over it. So, I understand the huge important sacrifice.
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November 12, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Thank you dearest, Christy for reading my poem. I feel so sorry for your grandma and her brother. My father lost his brother in the same war and to honor his brother my father baptized me after him! God bless you!
Y. Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Hi Demetrios, You have a good tribute piece for our heroes. Well done. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:32 PM
It is the least we can do for those who give their life for us to live free. Thank you dear, Alexis!
Bateman Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Hallo Herr Professor!! A magnificent tribute to the veterans who did so much for others and paid the ultimate price. So many never had the chance to live on and to return home. (As a U.S. military veteran who survived a former military career, I salute you for your words of praise and inspiration here for those who did so much, and sacrificed their lives for the freedoms that many of us in the world enjoy today!!) SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Gary, mein freund was fur eine schone uberraschung!! So good to see you my friend after so very long time! In reality it is not only to those who died that we owe our gratitude but also to those who served and fought! Certainly to those who gave up their life for us to be free we owe everything! Thank you my friend for your visit and comment! You honor me with your presence here since you know first hand what is all about! Danke!
Gupta Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:05 AM
A great tribute for their sacrifices ... a great work ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Thank you my friend, Probir, for your visit and kind comment!
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:15 AM
- A lovely tribute poem, Demetrios ... many sacrificed their lives - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:04 AM
True thus we have to remember them. It is the least we can do my friend Anne-Lise! Thank you and hugs!
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:15 AM
a 7
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:10 AM
So generous! Thank you!
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