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It's called, "The Greatest Story Ever Told," A virgin's child fulfilling prophecy The Son of God who died for you and me The Bible tells, "to save our sinful souls." Another story just not quite as old The struggle of a people to be free Some fought and died for our democracy These freedoms we enjoy, the debt that's owed And yet we draw on faith to give us hope Conveniently we worship as we please Just thankful that one day is all it costs So we can get back to our slipp'ry slope Our veterans gave us this life of ease They died for us, just not hung from a cross by Daniel Turner dedicated to all United States Veterans

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Date: 11/22/2016 6:41:00 AM
"Inspirational poem i like man"
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Date: 11/14/2016 7:25:00 PM
I agree my friend. They paid the terrible price for our freedom which we take for granted. As my dad used to say "If good men don't stand up and defend what is ours bad men will take it away." A fine write. Seven God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/12/2016 7:41:00 PM
This is such a wonderfully written Sonnet tribute to our veterans, Daniel. There are many vets in my family and your poem is very special to me. 7 Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/13/2016 8:10:00 AM
Mrs Sandra, I understand the price that was paid for my freedoms and privileges. Thank you for your kind comments and thank you to all of your family who has served.
Date: 11/12/2016 9:11:00 AM
Beautiful write. We have to always do everything for our veterans and more.
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Date: 11/13/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Maurice. Yes, we owe them more than we can ever repay.
Date: 11/11/2016 8:26:00 AM
An admirable tribute for those who fell for us to live dear, Daniel!
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Date: 11/11/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios. i appreciate your kind comments. God bless:)
Date: 11/11/2016 8:14:00 AM
and many kneel on wounded knees... Salute ~ j
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, John:)
Date: 11/10/2016 9:08:00 AM
A nice poetic salute to our veterans Daniel.
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Date: 11/10/2016 8:07:00 AM
Wonderful tribute my friend!
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Date: 11/15/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thanks Mike:)
Date: 11/10/2016 7:09:00 AM
The death of our Lord Jesus Christ for us sinful mankind still continues to change lives:) and yes, we must thank Him and remember those veterans who died for the country:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/10/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Jo.

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