Veteran's Day

i can only
go back
in time
in my
mind
but
to
be

five or fifty 
five years 
of age on 
May fifth 
at five 
fifty
five
a.m.

age 5
at that
time of
day i'd be
off sleeping
and dreaming
of shooting my 
stick guns while

playing being
a cowboy 
fighting
indians
but if i
we're
fifty
five

i'd be
awake
maybe 
sweating in
remembrance
of a day that was five
plus five subtracted from
today's date not knowing then

that in the eighth
month to come
which is five
plus three
on the
14th
four
plus

1
two 
planes
would drop
the same bombs
on two different cities
killing many but ending
the 2nd world war for what

it
was
worth

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Date: 11/10/2019 5:38:00 PM
I personally think it was an awful choice even though it ended the war. They could have exploded it somewhere where there was no population and still demonstrated to the world how powerful they were.
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Date: 11/11/2019 5:13:00 AM
I agree Richard, but hate to say all the war torn cities, including European ones, though they still have their old world charm; are more modern than any USA city. I'm not advocating distruction, but in the long run the USA is the one that will collapse.
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