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Vestigial Vagabond

The tail of a beaver, bill of a duck yet they pull it off with honor and pluck made with spare parts they capture our hearts with DNA tests that read WTF ©8/31/2018 for Any Animal Or Creature Limerick Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2018 10:11:00 AM

I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Curtis Moorman

Date: 9/17/2018 8:10:00 AM

The hump of a camel Or an elephant's trunk Made me see your poem As a real slam dunk Congrats on your win in Charlie's contest, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 3:57:00 PM

My sister just gave me a WTF birthday card (a sour looking person on it) I opened it up and it said. WHY THE FACE?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 3:56:00 PM

For me it was one of the funniest!! Congrats, my friend.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 12:25:00 AM

C'mon. It's a FAVE for me. Superbly done, John, notwithstanding the small rule issue... Congrats on pulling of a winner!

John Lawless
Date: 9/13/2018 7:48:00 AM

if there was on thing he hated - the muse hated rules--- oh those rules - rules - rules -rules..... glad you liked it Line

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 9:40:00 AM

John, I love this one. But unfortunately the last line had to have an animals name in it. I laughed my --- off after reading. Thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations on you placement...Charlie

John Lawless
Date: 9/13/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Charles....with a last name like Lawless it seems a genetic inability to follow the rules.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2018 3:29:00 PM

hahaha. You slay me, John

John Lawless
Date: 9/13/2018 7:50:00 AM

Hey Andrea, glad you enjoyed the poor guys misfortune.