Rhoma Em Poet Free verse

Vessel of Birthing Buds

We put the urn aboard ship
Roots teeming from lavish fields
Yellow bells and peonies birthing soon
As the moon softens its limbs 
Brightening  the way our vessel rides
Through blissful miles  of  springtime day.



For Contest   Complete The Lines  of nette onclaud
Jul 25, 2015   posted by Rhoma Em
Line 5:  ‘We put the urn aboard ship.’----  Sappho

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Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2015 at 8:32 PM very unique one. Makes me curious how Sappho finished up!! Congrats for your win.

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2015 at 12:48 AM you tweaked the theme so differently, rhoma... congrats and thanks for beingpart of this process!

Laura Leiser August 4, 2015 at 12:31 PM Congrats on your win, Rhoma :)

Tammy Reams August 4, 2015 at 8:30 AM Congrats on your win Rhoma!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2015 at 12:47 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Rhoma! Wonderful imagery!

Skat A August 4, 2015 at 12:41 AM Rhoma, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Eve Roper August 3, 2015 at 9:17 PM Rhoma, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 4:34 PM beautiful imagery Rhoma congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx