Very Good Day

The thunderstorm washed away last night
Everything bad on earth
The rain took all the chalk away
So today, is a very good day

The trees are green though it's October
And the sun is shining so clearly
The gentle wind makes the tall trees sway
Yes today is a very good day

I smile when I step out of artificial light
Into the warmth of the autumn sun
I'm begging the peaceful feeling, "stay-
'cause today is a very good day"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 14, 2012 at 1:06 PM
A very well written piece. Very enjoyed. Michael
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October 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM
I'm so glad you had a nice day - it had been a sunny day here. - Like a good poem - and this is good J-M. - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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