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Very Disturbed

There are times when I wonder what it would be like If poetry sites were no longer, would I become unladylike Use distasteful words Be very disturbed Yelling a bad words from my normally joyous wind pipe

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Silent One

Date: 1/3/2018 2:35:00 PM

I think you are a politean really... this is just secret side to you...

Judith S

Date: 1/3/2018 12:45:00 PM

Wait ... so being on poetry sites STOPS you from doing that???

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/3/2018 2:24:00 PM

YUP and especially knowing a sweetie like you! xxx (whatta charmer eh!)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/3/2018 9:50:00 AM

I imagine your wife appreciates the outlet ;) good morning dear Jack! xomo

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/3/2018 9:58:00 AM

If I didn't swim in the Soup... who knows what evil lurks!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/3/2018 7:05:00 AM

Don't be a poetry bore//Yodel your lim'riks some more//In your mind//a legend find//swaddled in self made-up lore. JOY US ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/3/2018 7:28:00 AM

Need a poetry cop... can't stop... obsessed as I sit here in a dress... a vision of loveliness... oh woe is me... sure wanna flee... but need my cohorts in crime... to mess with my mind! OOOUUUUEEEEEE!!!