Vertigo

I'm falling, falling falling so far so fast so reckless so deep Yes I'm falling, falling God help me I'm falling Why am I falling so crazy so madly so helplessly in love with you Date Posted: 2/28/2013 Topic: A (Love and Romance) Submitted For: The 'Choose a Topic' Contest Sponsored by: Russel Sivey

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/28/2016 1:58:00 PM

Yep, this really covers how a person feels and why they call it falling in love. I love it Tim! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )

Lu Loo

Date: 8/28/2016 11:39:00 AM

Tim, so romantic...thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement (sorry for the late comment) -luloo :)

Tim Ryerson
Date: 8/28/2016 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Laura!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/27/2016 11:08:00 PM

Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this powerful write. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/1/2015 7:10:00 AM

Hi Tim. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)

Skat A

Date: 11/28/2015 3:09:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations on your lovely poetic mood win. LUV SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/26/2015 10:16:00 PM

Wonderful pen Tim.. brilliant take.. congrats on big win!

Neva Romaine

Date: 11/10/2015 2:38:00 PM

Hey Tim, a hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Trashed #3 contest! This is a great poem and thank goodness BW saw the excellent writing. Be Blessed, Neva

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2015 1:28:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats at your win in the trashed #3 contest Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 11/9/2015 11:07:00 AM

Tim, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/27/2015 9:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win. I too, fell for my wife exactly like that! Great poem!! A7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 12:44:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel Tim!

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 8:39:00 PM

TIM. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2015 6:06:00 PM

TIM. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"

Lee Carter

Date: 7/21/2015 8:49:00 AM

Congrats Tim on your win!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/20/2015 9:32:00 PM

Well, Tim, if that doesn't snare her, there's something wrong with the girl. Congrats, Viv

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2015 2:45:00 PM

Oh I've fallen for this write Tim - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2015 2:40:00 PM

Love seeing this one on a top winning list again, Tim, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/20/2015 2:11:00 PM

Aww sweet :)

Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:28:00 PM

what a fall Tim,:-). Congratulations, with your awesome once upon a time poet destroyer winning poem HIT. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

Heather Ober

Date: 7/15/2013 10:36:00 AM

Congrats, Tim! My second time reading this one and I loved it again.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/15/2013 8:52:00 AM

Tim putting a smile on my face this morning. Thank you, and a big congrats on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 7/14/2013 6:13:00 PM

awesome poem. SandyIvy

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/14/2013 4:19:00 PM

great one, tim! congrats!

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 7/14/2013 12:03:00 AM

great write.Falling from I to become we is really great indeed.nice to read. Congrats for the win again

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2013 11:57:00 PM

Tim.. stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA