Tim Ryerson Poet Free verse

Vertigo

I'm falling, falling
falling so far
so fast
so reckless
so deep
Yes I'm falling, falling
God help me I'm falling
Why am I falling
so crazy
so madly
so helplessly
in love with you

Date Posted: 2/28/2013
Topic: A (Love and Romance)
Submitted For: The 'Choose a Topic' Contest
Sponsored by: Russel Sivey

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Connie Marcum Wong August 28, 2016 at 1:58 PM Yep, this really covers how a person feels and why they call it falling in love. I love it Tim! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )

Beautiful Scars August 28, 2016 at 11:39 AM Tim, so romantic...thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement (sorry for the late comment) -luloo :) Tim Ryerson August 28, 2016 at 3:26 PM Thanks Laura!

Sunita U.D Palawon August 27, 2016 at 11:08 PM Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this powerful write. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi December 1, 2015 at 7:10 AM Hi Tim. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 3:09 PM Tim, Congratulations on your lovely poetic mood win. LUV SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 26, 2015 at 10:16 PM Wonderful pen Tim.. brilliant take.. congrats on big win!

Neva Romaine November 10, 2015 at 2:38 PM Hey Tim, a hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Trashed #3 contest! This is a great poem and thank goodness BW saw the excellent writing. Be Blessed, Neva

Jan Allison November 9, 2015 at 1:28 PM Dropping back with my congrats at your win in the trashed #3 contest Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A November 9, 2015 at 11:07 AM Tim, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT

Robert Lindley July 27, 2015 at 9:52 AM Congrats on your win. I too, fell for my wife exactly like that! Great poem!! A7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2015 at 12:44 AM Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel Tim!

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 8:39 PM TIM. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2015 at 6:06 PM TIM. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"

Lee Carter July 21, 2015 at 8:49 AM Congrats Tim on your win!

Viv Wigley July 20, 2015 at 9:32 PM Well, Tim, if that doesn't snare her, there's something wrong with the girl. Congrats, Viv

Jan Allison July 20, 2015 at 2:45 PM Oh I've fallen for this write Tim - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A July 20, 2015 at 2:40 PM Love seeing this one on a top winning list again, Tim, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE

Casarah Nance July 20, 2015 at 2:11 PM Aww sweet :)

Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:28 PM what a fall Tim,:-). Congratulations, with your awesome once upon a time poet destroyer winning poem HIT. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

Heather Ober July 15, 2013 at 10:36 AM Congrats, Tim! My second time reading this one and I loved it again.

Connie Gildersleeve July 15, 2013 at 8:52 AM Tim putting a smile on my face this morning. Thank you, and a big congrats on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sandy Ivy D July 14, 2013 at 6:13 PM awesome poem. SandyIvy

Ilene Bauer July 14, 2013 at 4:19 PM great one, tim! congrats!

Poet. Undertaker July 14, 2013 at 12:03 AM great write.Falling from I to become we is really great indeed.nice to read. Congrats for the win again

Poet Destroyer A July 13, 2013 at 11:57 PM Tim.. stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

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