Vertical Sea

Vertical Sea

Arise horizons tell us what you see
Vertical rain comes on high wave conclusions adrift in mist
Fortunes waiting out on the sea for men who come in ships
So much rain came in from all directions in one instance
Sanity was questioned at a distance along with risk
Vertical rain broke portal windows with such force
Eighty mile winds crashed in as well
Distracted men at playing cards, drinking rum for fun
Now huddled in fear within the thin skin cabin
No one slept inside the dead of hour’s darkness 
Troubles bounced up and down out there

Pirates in the past fumbled their rich existence down
A new crop of water warriors can be found to take their place
Doubloons are buried in dark quarter’s underwater world

Above and below deck, inundated with storm and fear
Between each plank the storm took out more men
No thick skinned seasoned soul could harness or hold on
No salty language sailor could be heard

Above the tumultuous storm
The fierce beast rolled in on angry nature’s back
With it, folding over fifty foot waves, came torrential rains
Which pounded heavy on the bow

Churned up rogue waters on the vulnerability of sea life
Nature itself turned on them in adept ferocity
In violence it flipped the ship

Showed contempt for every soul on board
With total disregard for life and limb
And complete indifference towards the sailors

The blackness, void of light, could not help these tyrannical conditions
The monstrous storm consumed more than the rain
It drank up men and drowned them
Others flew in all directions
Most of them broke necks, died before they hit the deck
Instantly killed, dragged into the cold dark depths as well
All steps were in the wrong direction, in favor of the waves
They could not even cower in the craft or say a prayer
The boat and men turned upside down
The ship had splintered into nothing and flew into the gale

Only three men remained, bobbing on the giant waves
Flapping their arms like molested chickens on the sea
Tossed in every direction but straight ahead 
Rogue waves were in control, in hysterical rage and agitation
No one knew what happened to the crew 
They were never seen again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/6/2014 1:49:00 PM
It certainly reaches out and takes a good old grip on you! A good poem, Earl. :) john.
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Date: 12/6/2014 2:10:00 PM
Hi John, Thank you so much for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes it's true. If you play in water you are going to get a little wet. Add a little wind to the mix and nature can sure take hold. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 12/2/2014 5:45:00 PM
Brilliant masterpiece Earl. A very tragic end.
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Date: 12/2/2014 6:11:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. It is true. It was a sad ending. I try to think about the good times, when the crew had plenty of rum, fun and card playing in the cabin. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl
Date: 12/2/2014 2:10:00 PM
A great epic poem! Well written, Earl, loved the imagery. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:12:00 PM
Good evening Darlene, Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and blessings. I could use some blessings. You can never have enough. I am very happy that you enjoyed my creation. Take care. Earl
Date: 12/2/2014 1:16:00 PM
what an epic from start to finish incredible story and imagery - a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:31:00 PM
Hi Jan. I'm happy you enjoyed my little invention. I almost got lost between the waves myself. I'm still out of breath. I hope you are having a nice day. Take care. Earl
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