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images yesterday's visions in a well within lost in wonder an inner light envision dreams hallucinatory visions lying as flotsam, washed by the tide cascading igniting pictures within my mind's eye a deluge of dreams floods of fantasy rivers of reverie torrents of thoughts vapours of visions waterfalls of words imaginative dreams passing allusions intermingle with enigmatic thoughts a transient sense of the present mutli-layered broken syntax in semantic ambiguity now resolved innovative coherence now apparent in folios of verse

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Date: 11/10/2020 7:37:00 PM
Thanks, Brian. The rippling alliteration is especially alluring, but you brought me along on your poetic journey. I appreciate your work.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/10/2020 10:04:00 PM
Many thanks Lmillton
Date: 11/10/2020 11:22:00 AM
So creative Brian. Love the staggered lines like "waterfalls of words." Beautiful image. Thank you for sharing these lovely images and poetic word play!
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/10/2020 11:25:00 AM
This open form is where I eventually arrived and stayed Sam,Cheers stay creative