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Verse Freed To Imagine

images
       
yesterday's visions 
in a well
         within
      
      lost
          in 
             wonder
an inner light
        envision

dreams
       hallucinatory
visions
         
  lying
as flotsam,
         washed by the tide
cascading 

igniting 
    pictures 
within
my mind's eye
                            
a deluge of dreams
             floods of fantasy
                       rivers of reverie
                                torrents of thoughts
                                    vapours of visions
                                        waterfalls of words
 imaginative dreams
          passing allusions
 intermingle
    with enigmatic thoughts

a transient sense 
          of the present
mutli-layered         

broken
             syntax
                   in semantic
      ambiguity

now resolved

innovative
           coherence

now apparent

in
 folios  
      of  verse
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Kauffman Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:22 AM
So creative Brian. Love the staggered lines like "waterfalls of words." Beautiful image. Thank you for sharing these lovely images and poetic word play!
Strand Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:25 AM
This open form is where I eventually arrived and stayed Sam,Cheers stay creative
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