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Written, May 16, 2025
For the International Contest, Your Choice, H
Sponsor, Brian Strand

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it is cold and flowers are d y i n g becoming w i t h e r e d memories leaves d.r.i.f.t.i.n.g and rain is f a l l i n g and the river flows like a stream of glass the grass is f a d i n g and birds are FLyiNg ~~ away ........

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/17/2025 10:11:00 PM

Ah i love this how descriptive it is and how youv written on rain so well dear constance: how birds fly away and flowers wither etc with rain falling. Youv delivered a picturesque poem! A fave for me. Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/17/2025 5:06:00 PM

I mostly appreciate free verses like these. Thank you for my excellent placement in your most recent contest. You're extremely talented in words fragmentating. Best wishes for the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2025 3:28:00 PM

You are really getting into the cool patterning of phrases. I really enjoy a free verse like this. Thanks for your last contest. It was a pleasure to write for.