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Poetry/Free Verse/ vers libra
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1727-171-26
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, April 26, 2025
For the International Contest, Your Choice V
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 04/26/2025

FIRST PLACE

beauty all around crumbling fragile leaves soaring oh, the splendor of whirling burnt orange and red leaves spin like weeping blood red raindrops oh, listen to the sweet sound of falling leaves while the wind utters low wails like a hundred violins and hidden birds sing a beautiful symphony

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2025 8:04:00 PM

This is splendid writing. A fave

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/26/2025 12:03:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem. I like how it begins with the motion of leaves and ends in a symphony. Good luck with the contest.