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Veronique

Pardon ma'am, but I noticed you've been staring at this painting for a while
She is beautiful but has such a melancholy face, it's hard to look away
Her name is Veronique and that's me behind her, the little canary
She's been my sorrowful mistress now for almost two hundred years
When the artist painted her she was wearing a subtle smile but then
Gabriel told her he had to leave for a fortnight and promised to return
He vowed to finish this canvas, painting her smile back on again
but thousands of fortnights and volumes of her tears have come and gone
no sign of Gabriel, so my Lady sits and stares wistfully, remembering him
She touches the bow of her violin but hasn't played since the day he left
I hear her weep late at night when she reads the poem he left for her
The edges of the page are torn and tattered,  tear stained parchment
but Veronique reads it night after night then holds it against her heart
He wrote in extravagant hand the words, now on yellowed page:

              Thou fill'st my heart with love
              More than any winged birds
              Could fill the heavens above
              Thou art the chalice of my soul
              The cup from which I drink
              My warmth when I grow cold
              Thou art nectar of my desire
              Thou art the spark of my fire

Those are words any fair maiden would swoon to have written for her
She still holds hope that her Gabriel will return but I worry about her 
She keeps repeating the words he wrote on the back of this painting:

My Veronique ~ 
           Goddess with cinnabar tresses in green velvet dresses

I've told you her name and mine is Cyros. May I ask yours?

A subtle smile crossed her lips, her skin pale and wrinkled with age
This lovely woman with touches of cinnabar in her grayed tresses
Stood with charm and grace. She curtsied in her green velvet dress
In whispered voice said,  "Cyros, I am Madame Veronique Rossetti"
               



Painting: Veronica Veronese      Artist: Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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     6th of May, 2016         Within A Gilded Frame Contest
     Sponsored by:             Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Lin, what does one say when one is confronted with poetic excellence. I think one could say, a belated congratulations on your win in the contest. This is such a wonderful read. One just swims through the words and wishes to become a part of the canvas itself. Your words sing so gently into the heart. You give life to your canvas and i wish to be within it. This has such truly beautiful content, even though there ends being such sadness. This is a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
Richards Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Such imagination to express in such a unique way.........and stepping not only into the painting, but one of a vintage age. Well done, Lin !!
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Thank you very much, Carrie. Your compliments are taken to heart.
Smith Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Told Ya!!!
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Yes sir, you did. You're my Number 1 fan. Thanks, Charlie.
Palli Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Lovely poem, Lin! I enjoyed it very much!
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Inman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:31 AM
This is a wonderful story and an excellent interpretation of the contest theme. Very well done Lin.
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Thanks, James.
Dalei Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Lin, Congratulation on ur top win. Well penned.............//:) hugs
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Thank you.
Mo Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Congratulations Lyn
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Thanks, Debra.
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Lovely write, so sad. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Thanks and hugs, Eve.
May Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Love the ending...Congrats on a great win...
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Raina Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations Lin! Beautifully written....
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Thanks a lot.
Raven Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Hi Lin, excellent, your words take one into the heart of the painting giving it emotion and life. I do Love to follow each journey in your poetic dreams. This one is special, it really should do well in the contest. I Love it, i hope it shall place high for you Lin. Your words sing, This has to be a seven and it is a fave. A highly enjoyable read. Hugs....Mike. XX
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Hi Mike and thank you for your awesome review of my poem. I thought it was finished twice but knew something was missing until I changed the ending. I'm happy that you gave it such generous comments.
Smith Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Lin, this is a truly wonderful narrative. One of your better writes, in my humble opinion. Winner!!!
Lane Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Sorry I overlooked this comment, Charlie. Your opinion matters to me and thanks for liking this write so well. ;)
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May 6, 2016 at 9:44 AM
this is brilliant we have a winner a story and a poem in one congrats stephen
Lane Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Thanks, Stephen. I'm really glad you like it. ;)
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