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Vermillion Rain

Forecasts call for red clouds
with a chance of fate
as the people outside
are soaked in vermillion heart-shaped water drops
unable to escape from their match
when dancing in the rain with the other half of their worlds
forming into immortal stars
in this on-ground spiritual galaxy
to carry on the love to the rest in need of light

2/14/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/6/2018 6:47:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Vermillion.
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win with your beautifully expressed poem, Vermillion..
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Vermillion. Well done.
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:54:00 AM
Oh Vermillion, I loved this poem, There is so much said in such few words. There's always a fine line between shorter poems and longer poems,, but you wrote this outstandingly. I loved every single word! congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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