Vermillion Scythe Poet Free verse

Vermillion Rain

Forecasts call for red clouds
with a chance of fate
as the people outside
are soaked in vermillion heart-shaped water drops
unable to escape from their match
when dancing in the rain with the other half of their worlds
forming into immortal stars
in this on-ground spiritual galaxy
to carry on the love to the rest in need of light

2/14/2018

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Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 6:47 AM Back with more congrats, Vermillion.

Susan Ashley February 27, 2018 at 8:27 PM Congratulations on your excellent win with your beautifully expressed poem, Vermillion..

Line Gauthier February 27, 2018 at 8:12 AM Congrats on your win, Vermillion. Well done.

Beautiful Scars February 27, 2018 at 5:54 AM Oh Vermillion, I loved this poem, There is so much said in such few words. There's always a fine line between shorter poems and longer poems,, but you wrote this outstandingly. I loved every single word! congrats and thank you :)-luloo