thriveni c mysore Poet Free verse

Vermeer’s milkmaid

scrupulous maid
     content, playful face

balanced poverty
     ultramarine touch

bread baked right
     blushing thoughts

rolled up sleeves  
     neglected arms

damped window
     agreeable fate

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Jaymee Thomas June 12, 2025 at 2:45 PM The economy of language here is commendable, Thriveni. Really beautifully executed. It's a favorite! thriveni c mysore June 13, 2025 at 5:10 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. ah! a favorite?! I am honored dear friend, thank you so much. I feel so grateful today.

Linda Alice Fowler June 12, 2025 at 11:31 AM Congratulations dear Thriveni! :) thriveni c mysore June 13, 2025 at 5:04 AM Your kind visit with sweet words brings a happy smile on my face dear friend. Thank you so much, means much to me.