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Verb...Ose

sans verbs,verse may.....SHOW some may do,but others...DON'T help,our haiku.................TELL

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/2/2010 4:53:00 PM

Dear Brian, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Dane Ann's First Ever " End Line Word " Form Contest YOUR Extreme Knowledge of POETRY Form is Greatly Appreciated as YOU have written a Perfect Gem of This Form Thank_YOU for Supporting Dane and My Efforts To bring this Form into Being YOU ARE a Great Mentor I read all YOUR Contest to Gain POETIC Knowledge and Wisdom Again Congrats YOUR Liege ALWAYS. ..HG

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/2/2010 1:17:00 PM

Hey, Brian, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post these comments on my behalf. ...Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Brian. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/2/2010 12:51:00 AM

Clever work, Brian. You deserved to be a winner. Congratulations! from (^_^) Noel.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/1/2010 10:05:00 PM

Interesting write! Brian. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2010 8:31:00 PM

Hey Brian, I send you warm congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/1/2010 7:56:00 PM

congrats Brian! always well put together!

John Freeman

Date: 3/1/2010 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Brian. Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/1/2010 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations Brian, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann (I enjoyed the Sans Verbs education...very interesting!)

Marty Owens

Date: 3/1/2010 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Enjoyed..Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2010 4:15:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. somehow I missed this one but am happy to be commenting now to congratulate u .. a wonderful win ...luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/1/2010 2:48:00 PM

Yes, I will try! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/12/2010 8:17:00 AM

And, you, dear Brian, have definitely shown your poetic skills and diversity with this "End Line Word" senryu. Thank you for supporting HG and I in our efforts to establish a this new poetic form. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/12/2010 8:09:00 AM

The secret of creative writing , in 3 lines . Now if only , if only , IF ONLY I could perfect this ...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2010 7:54:00 AM

wow I LOVE it...very creative and teaching! Now if our poets would understand the meaning or difference of it wow we'd all be Shakespeare! Light & Love