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Verblassende Erinnerungen / Fading Memories

Flügelschlag der Zeit Vergangene Jahre zerronnen Verblassende Erinnerungen Time beat of wings Past years melted away Fading memories

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/2/2010 12:20:00 PM
Great imagery with this one Gert !! I am still jealous of your ability to write in two languages!! Wonderful to read even if I'm not always sure what I'm pronouncing. Is "flugelschlag" time? der ... of ? Zeit ... wings? Or is it back the other way ... smile ...
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Date: 4/26/2010 6:18:00 AM
Do you write in German first then translate? or both ways?
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Date: 4/24/2010 1:25:00 PM
We all saw that in the photo from Raul and I know the contest has closed but its an awesome write of description to detail the photo... thankxxx for your many sweet comments on my poetry Gert ..appreciate and hope u will try entering some of my neat contests on Soup... I am on my 5th one now... happy weekend..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/24/2010 11:51:00 AM
I love the way you make sadness seem beautiful !! Nicely done, Gert !!
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Date: 4/23/2010 1:34:00 PM
so much talent! Good job
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Date: 4/23/2010 11:07:00 AM
Interesting write...Don't know whether good or bad...It could be bad to not remember....Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:58:00 AM
Well done a pleasure to read a time in life when visions of memories slowly slip out of the mind, also thanks for the comment on the muddy rice. have your self a wonderful day..p.d.
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:34:00 AM
ooooh, I write of this theme a lot, Gert. It's always a good one to me! Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:18:00 AM
very nice HAPPY BIRTHDAY enjoy your day as well as your weekend best wishes faleshia
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Date: 4/23/2010 3:37:00 AM
enjoyed, thanks for your comments today.
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Date: 4/23/2010 1:01:00 AM
Great Senryu and excellent translation...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:50:00 PM
A nice senryu. I enjoyed it
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