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Verblassende Erinnerungen / Fading Memories

Flügelschlag der Zeit
Vergangene Jahre zerronnen
Verblassende Erinnerungen



Time beat of wings
Past years melted away
Fading memories

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Sue Mason

Date: 5/2/2010 12:20:00 PM

Great imagery with this one Gert !! I am still jealous of your ability to write in two languages!! Wonderful to read even if I'm not always sure what I'm pronouncing. Is "flugelschlag" time? der ... of ? Zeit ... wings? Or is it back the other way ... smile ...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/26/2010 6:18:00 AM

Do you write in German first then translate? or both ways?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/24/2010 1:25:00 PM

We all saw that in the photo from Raul and I know the contest has closed but its an awesome write of description to detail the photo... thankxxx for your many sweet comments on my poetry Gert ..appreciate and hope u will try entering some of my neat contests on Soup... I am on my 5th one now... happy weekend..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2010 11:51:00 AM

I love the way you make sadness seem beautiful !! Nicely done, Gert !!

Susan Palli

Date: 4/23/2010 1:34:00 PM

so much talent! Good job

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 11:07:00 AM

Interesting write...Don't know whether good or bad...It could be bad to not remember....Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2010 8:58:00 AM

Well done a pleasure to read a time in life when visions of memories slowly slip out of the mind, also thanks for the comment on the muddy rice. have your self a wonderful day..p.d.