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Unblemished in a seamlessly soft, Carrara marble, all young and proud, Standing in the moment of pure delight, With nobody else around, Your soft kitten paw covered in cloth, Both puppies forever unclothed, Your figure is perfect in every which way, Your truth is fully exposed, The truth of your thoughts of intimately free, Thoughts in your secretive dance, Thoughts of the seductive play in your mind, Of a musically youthful romance, My beautiful Venus standing with flowers, You’re my flower with a beautiful voice, Singing the song of beauty and love, Forever singing without making a noise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/21/2018 12:05:00 PM
The stillness roars...frozen but not forgotten...nicely done my friend...love & Venus statutes...^WW^
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Date: 9/20/2018 5:19:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic, well depicted imagery; the poem has great flow. Well done.
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