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Venus Down Under

The sun rose to the occasion To greet the waning moon Who had greeted the Willow Tree Hoping at midnight just a little spoon What a delight to see them In the early morning light Venus orbiting down under Wishing to view the sight

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/2/2010 8:38:00 AM

Great write, Sara! When still living in the southern hemisphere I loved the nightly sky with the Southern Cross. And thank you for your ongoing comments! All the best!...Gert

James Fraser

Date: 8/2/2010 7:33:00 AM

Scenic little rhyme Sara, just lovely >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/1/2010 5:20:00 PM

Very lovely poem, Sara! I always seek out Venus in the night sky. It has a spectacular blue/green color. I'm returning from my vacation tomorrow. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/1/2010 10:13:00 AM

beautiful one Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 8/1/2010 9:03:00 AM

"Venus orbiting down under." This is great! You've revealed the image's true nature. This is Aphrodite. The Greeks would have loved your poem. Love, Dave