Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Venus Down Under

The sun rose to the occasion
To greet the waning moon
Who had greeted the Willow Tree
Hoping at midnight just a little spoon

What a delight to see them
In the early morning light
Venus orbiting down under
Wishing to view the sight

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Gert W. Knop August 2, 2010 at 8:38 AM Great write, Sara! When still living in the southern hemisphere I loved the nightly sky with the Southern Cross. And thank you for your ongoing comments! All the best!...Gert

James Fraser August 2, 2010 at 7:33 AM Scenic little rhyme Sara, just lovely >> James

Carolyn Devonshire August 1, 2010 at 5:20 PM Very lovely poem, Sara! I always seek out Venus in the night sky. It has a spectacular blue/green color. I'm returning from my vacation tomorrow. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts August 1, 2010 at 10:13 AM beautiful one Sara

Daver Austin August 1, 2010 at 9:03 AM "Venus orbiting down under." This is great! You've revealed the image's true nature. This is Aphrodite. The Greeks would have loved your poem. Love, Dave