Venus ( 1.618 : 1 )

Venus ( 1.618 : 1 )

Who would see such bare force light 
To be or break the bonds of anonymous 
A panorama clouds sunset-ed bright
Captured in the form
Made sensual by her scarlet dress

Far to beautiful not to cause
Some moment of silence
Some heartbeat ache
And drowning in curves pauses momentarily
To ponder on the thoughts of her dreams
She is “who” secretly
Inside the souls personality

Pray quietly Oh Goddess Venus

Feminine centre Venus
Pour upon her lips
A syllable of desire
Wanting increasing
To place the passion word
Upon these lips of mine

And need
Sweet Goddess Venus
Need to be
A wanting unity joined
By Venus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 28, 2008 at 9:42 AM
Colin this poem is exceptional. What beauty and love shown. Flowed perfectly, a passion shown. Colin this is up there with any love poem I have read. Put this in a contest let everyone see. You have won my vote not because Im your friend but more importantly because I tell the truth. My father loved this poem I made a copy for him he paints and I think you have inspired him to paint Venus. Thank you Colin for this one my father joy brings happiness to me and you have created that in him. Michael
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