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Venture Forth

Recover lost horizons Sail beyond Outer Space Revive the imagination Of a faith-starved race Dive deep into oceans Unexplored, Inner Space Where waters surge majestic Midst moments of grace March 01, 2021 ALL YOURS (Mar 3) Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 3/3/2021 3:25:00 PM

Gershon, Congratulations on your fine win. That first line is so good, it pulls the reader right into the poem.

Constance La France

Date: 3/3/2021 8:28:00 AM

Gershon, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with your wonderfully penned Rhyme poem, well done _Constance

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 7:11:00 PM

Thank you for noticing my placement, Constance. Light and Joy, Gershon

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/3/2021 7:38:00 AM

A great poem to muse on. You got me thinking, there is so much to this grand creation that we are not yet aware of. Congratulations on your placement!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 7:09:00 PM

Juliet, thank you for your kind words and for noticing my placement in the contest. Thoughts and Musings, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2021 1:12:00 PM

This part intrigues me. "Dive deep into oceans Unexplored, Inner Space" I am ready to become an astronaut and travel there.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 7:08:00 PM

I imagine that by now, Caren, you are well on your way to 'Inner Space.' Bring back some interesting discoveries, please. We need some good news for a change these days! Happy Landings, Gershon

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/2/2021 5:35:00 AM

Love this, Gershon. God bless you, Love, Gina

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2021 6:52:00 PM

Appreciate the love, Regina. Blessings and Bounty, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/1/2021 7:56:00 PM

I like this. xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/2/2021 9:06:00 PM

So nice to see your avatar, my long-lost friend. Hope you are ok. Best wishes, Gershon