Billy Hitz Poet Rhyme

Venting

I got a hair pin trigger
Got a holster on my hip
Put a nickel on my needle
So my record don't skip 

My attitude is ugly
There's no beauty in my beast
My attention span is faulty
And my anger has increased

I got a nasty disposition 
Got a thirst I cannot quench
It smells like broken spirit
I can hardly stand the stench

I got a sudden disconnection
Lug the load that's on my mind
I am NOT your great sensation
I'm the son that never shined

~Billy Hitz~

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Jan Allison July 20, 2016 at 4:27 PM Powerfully penned ... I can relate to the final stanza big time in my own life Billy but now with my poetry I am flying high - it saddens me its only now in my later life my mum has finally said for the first time that she is proud of me:-( hugs Jan xx Billy Hitz July 22, 2016 at 8:07 PM Thank you for your comment Jan. I appreciate your relating to my poem. WRITE ON! upward and onward.