Venomous Encounter

glacial eyes pierce stone while his flashy smile beguiles beautiful poison shivering in the icy aftermath feeling disoriented my attraction lingers By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders * a senyru and a kimo for A Mesh of Forms Contest (Russell Sivey) Third Place
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Merryman Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 7:45 PM
I like this, Rhonda!Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 7:07 PM
congratulations on a great wiinning poem. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Mysterous, dark, haunting, why do we love the bad boys? Congrad's on your win Light & love
Arno Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 4:46 PM
Love this Rhonda :) I think its a fantastic write :) Jon
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 8:52 AM
congrats Rhonda on a superb win for this eloquent mesh of forms.. great sensations flow in these intense lines luv..
Mister Roboto Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 10:40 PM
U had me at "Venomous Encounter".... a name like Vehement Episode", or "Venus Erotica" would have just plain missed the mark:) !!! ha! ~but 4 seriousNess here...my Florida friend, this is a heck of a piece! I write and have to read a ton of poetry ect...Although coming to the Soup is something I do for fun. But I gotta say, this is one of the better poems I have read this year! You are turning spoons here in the soup!~JSLaM
Edwards Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 10:23 PM
Awesome pairing of senyru and kimo Rhonda..its sure to do well in russell's contest xxx Hugs
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 8:30 PM
wonderful meshing of theser two forms Rhonda and brilliant conveying of theme chosen luv.. good luck in contest.. powerful piece ..
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