Venomous Encounter

glacial eyes pierce stone while his flashy smile beguiles beautiful poison shivering in the icy aftermath feeling disoriented my attraction lingers By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders * a senyru and a kimo for A Mesh of Forms Contest (Russell Sivey) Third Place

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/10/2012 7:45:00 PM

I like this, Rhonda!Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2012 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/9/2012 7:07:00 PM

congratulations on a great wiinning poem. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/9/2012 6:41:00 PM

Mysterous, dark, haunting, why do we love the bad boys? Congrad's on your win Light & love

Jon Arno

Date: 4/9/2012 4:46:00 PM

Love this Rhonda :) I think its a fantastic write :) Jon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2012 8:52:00 AM

congrats Rhonda on a superb win for this eloquent mesh of forms.. great sensations flow in these intense lines luv..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/11/2012 10:40:00 PM

U had me at "Venomous Encounter".... a name like Vehement Episode", or "Venus Erotica" would have just plain missed the mark:) !!! ha! ~but 4 seriousNess here...my Florida friend, this is a heck of a piece! I write and have to read a ton of poetry ect...Although coming to the Soup is something I do for fun. But I gotta say, this is one of the better poems I have read this year! You are turning spoons here in the soup!~JSLaM

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/10/2012 10:23:00 PM

Awesome pairing of senyru and kimo Rhonda..its sure to do well in russell's contest xxx Hugs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 8:30:00 PM

wonderful meshing of theser two forms Rhonda and brilliant conveying of theme chosen luv.. good luck in contest.. powerful piece ..