Venomous

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With sibilant voice
you spew venomous words
like poison
              dripping
                              from
                                          a vipers fangs
If only you could taste
your own bitterness
would you continue?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2020 2:39:00 PM

love this one!

Running Wolves
Date: 1/12/2020 7:27:00 PM

Thank you dear Lady

Funom Makama

Date: 1/10/2020 11:16:00 AM

Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

Running Wolves
Date: 1/10/2020 1:55:00 PM

Thank you very kindly Sir, and happy 2020 to you too

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/31/2019 12:39:00 PM

I do not think they could fathom it, let alone taste it. Well penned!

Running Wolves
Date: 12/31/2019 6:02:00 PM

Thank you as always dear Lady

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 12/31/2019 9:10:00 AM

...'poison' not 'posion'...so not my fangs dripping - but I continue. Out of all the venom read, yours is by far the best, in short...so far. Labyrinth. x

Running Wolves
Date: 12/31/2019 11:25:00 AM

Thank you very kindly for both your comment and for catching the typo...

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/27/2019 3:56:00 PM

powerful...i have one titled venomous i wrote several months ago...that word alone has depth of power... this one packs a punch... good write! hugs

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/31/2019 9:11:00 AM

hmmm

Running Wolves
Date: 12/27/2019 4:52:00 PM

Thank you, ill have to look yours up

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/25/2019 8:39:00 PM

Ouch!! I know what you are talking and I agree. There are many that like to sink their fangs in, never letting go either. I have dealt with a Venomous bite before. At the poetry site that I am the Admin over. She's not there anymore. Jealousy is an ugly trait. Very much so. ~ Brandy

Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you dear Lady