Vengeful Vogon Kitchen Ku

sieve sifting slight blight 
       fickle fact lung flung gargon ~

                choking chipotle




05.24.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 4:54 PM
jues tollbutt fartbunger's hotweb itscoombugo fabulifically delicmouse!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 5:40 PM
You didn't find it too salty? Thank you! ;), xomo
Mcguire Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 7:51 PM
not sure what this one means, but I enjoy the words and the rhythm and without a doubt intriguing
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 7:49 AM
...if you've ever worked in a kitchen you might ;), thank you Tim! xomo
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 12:30 PM
you nailed it Mo, all my poetry is bad so I wont embarrass myself and enter the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Tee hee! ;D, Thank you! It even makes sense if you try hard enough ~lol ...I just couldn't bring myself to writing nonsense (on purpose) ~xomo!
Theraven Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:22 PM
Pigeon Tart Pie, This is going to be some fun, I can tell. I know good (bad) Vogon poetry when I see it. Meno pleaz weel ba ro ant skoti dauges! translation: Good luck in the contest. -Richard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Thank you Richard. My very first Vogon rendering, but I feel like I have been rehearsing for this all of my life. I hope I do horribly, well. xomo
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:12 PM
how cool sounding, and love that choking alliteration at the end! Hey, I just put up a really cool video to go with my latest poem you commented to . thanks so much for your words!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:48 PM
I used pretty much all real English words though, probably a disqualification ;), Watching now, pretty logical. Already doing C, D and zinc, yay! Can't do the mask, claustrophobic, but again here, they're considered to protect others- got myself a face shield for shopping.
Ibeh Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 1:19 PM
GL with this vogon poem, Pigeon:-) I'm sure it's bad enough to win, lol. This is the weirdest form, ever, but I'll try and give it a whirl!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:51 PM
I did my worst! Thank you Edward :))) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Is that a kitchen Buddha? Lol...choking chipotle.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:52 PM
LOL! Love it! Thank you :)))) xomo!
Koplin Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:19 AM
lung flung. I've done that. lol
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:27 AM
Tis better to give than receive ;), xomo
Wolf Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Ha, ha! Somehow I pictured a chipmunk choking on chipotle... Silly me... ~ Vogon Woebegone
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 6:06 AM
I actually saw a chipmunk once nonchalantly chowing down on A slice of pepperoni. Not so silly now my friend. xomo
Faulkner Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 3:31 PM
Perplexing, in a pleasing way!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 6:04 AM
I couldn't make words up, just went for the pairings. Have you tried the frog leg moussaka with roe saki? ;), xomo
Leffanta Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 1:30 PM
My keyboard is just like that! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Mine was too when I spilled my Pangalactic Gargleblaster all over it. xomo
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 1:02 PM
What a horrible Haiku...too much hot sauce and the chips keep breaking
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Awesome! Thank you John! Not bad for English eh? xomo
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:19 PM
? this form confuses me, and I don't understand what you wrote hugs eve
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Thank you Eve! It is supposed to be bad ;), I even used real words! Hugs! xomo
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