Vengeful Vogon Kitchen Ku

sieve sifting slight blight 
       fickle fact lung flung gargon ~

                choking chipotle




05.24.2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/28/2020 4:54:00 PM

jues tollbutt fartbunger's hotweb itscoombugo fabulifically delicmouse!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/28/2020 5:40:00 PM

You didn't find it too salty? Thank you! ;), xomo

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/26/2020 7:51:00 PM

not sure what this one means, but I enjoy the words and the rhythm and without a doubt intriguing

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/27/2020 7:49:00 AM

...if you've ever worked in a kitchen you might ;), thank you Tim! xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 5/26/2020 12:30:00 PM

you nailed it Mo, all my poetry is bad so I wont embarrass myself and enter the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/26/2020 2:49:00 PM

Tee hee! ;D, Thank you! It even makes sense if you try hard enough ~lol ...I just couldn't bring myself to writing nonsense (on purpose) ~xomo!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/25/2020 8:22:00 PM

Pigeon Tart Pie, This is going to be some fun, I can tell. I know good (bad) Vogon poetry when I see it. Meno pleaz weel ba ro ant skoti dauges! translation: Good luck in the contest. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/26/2020 6:33:00 AM

Thank you Richard. My very first Vogon rendering, but I feel like I have been rehearsing for this all of my life. I hope I do horribly, well. xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2020 3:12:00 PM

how cool sounding, and love that choking alliteration at the end! Hey, I just put up a really cool video to go with my latest poem you commented to . thanks so much for your words!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 5/25/2020 3:48:00 PM

I used pretty much all real English words though, probably a disqualification ;), Watching now, pretty logical. Already doing C, D and zinc, yay! Can't do the mask, claustrophobic, but again here, they're considered to protect others- got myself a face shield for shopping.