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Venetian Blind

Peek, gentle whispers
What you seek of me, open
Your embrace, full mast

©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © Poet Tacito | Year Posted 2013

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Katherine Stella

March 29, 2014 at 12:52 PM

dont teasre me please me lol great play on words here loved imagery not always easy but you done very well here thanks for sharing and for your kind comment on my poem keep on sharing

March 29, 2014 at 12:53 PM

Ha. Indeed! :) Thank you so much, Katherine! Awesome of you to stop by!

March 2, 2014 at 10:26 PM

Lovely one, Drake.

March 2, 2014 at 11:10 PM

Awesome! Thank you so much, Juliet! =)

December 3, 2013 at 5:01 AM

Hello -yes it has been { AWHILE } and you are missed, I see you still have... A poetic "way with words" Such a unique style.

December 3, 2013 at 6:27 AM

WOO HOO! Hi there!! =D Thank you so much, Vicki. So nice to see you again!

Richard Lamoureux

December 2, 2013 at 8:45 AM

I enjoyed this one again. Good morning.

December 2, 2013 at 8:48 AM

Buenos Dias! =)

Eileen Manassian

September 12, 2013 at 7:38 AM

Hey you!!! Turns out I'm not traveling this week end, so...about the show...SOUP MAIL! Only AFTER I read your new poem...BLACKMAIL! HA HA! You did promise today....I'm waiting.....as are others, Go on!!! HURRY!

September 12, 2013 at 7:54 AM

;-) Awesome. It's posted now. =D

September 3, 2013 at 7:09 PM

Ahhh the peek...whispers..someone shy? Full mast..maybe not!...:-)

September 3, 2013 at 7:23 PM

Ha. Maybe, maybe not...thank you, Donna! :)

Charmaine Chircop

September 3, 2013 at 6:32 AM

Revisiting..rereading..till something new is posted?..This is a beauty..From our venetian blinds one will see only rain today..but i love the patter of rain as much as peeping sunrays : )

September 3, 2013 at 7:28 AM

Yes, we had rain here also. It seems to be better today. The raindrops of Fall. It was beautiful. Thank you so much, Charmaine. Something new today.... ;-)

September 3, 2013 at 4:42 AM

Your talent amazes me...to take a mundane object and infuse it with such life!

September 3, 2013 at 7:25 AM

It's called being slightly bored at work. ;-) If work wasn't injecting me with life, I had to take charge. lol Thanks so much, Monterey!

Shadow Hamilton

September 2, 2013 at 5:29 PM

Drake I love it excellent Senryu Shadow x smile

September 3, 2013 at 7:19 AM

=) Thank you so much, Shadow! I hope things are getting better with you!

Laura Breidenthal

September 2, 2013 at 4:27 PM

Whoa..I felt that embrace. This one gave me chills. Beautiful senryu! Always, Laura

September 2, 2013 at 4:32 PM

Hey there, Laura!! =D Thank you so much. I hope you get warmer soon from those chills. :)

September 2, 2013 at 1:36 PM

the venetion blind is now closed for viewing, lol... meaning, got a new one?... break a leg, drake.. hi!... :) huggs

September 2, 2013 at 1:51 PM

LOL! Adorable. Thank you so much, Nette. Possibly tomorrow. ;-)

Richard Lamoureux

September 2, 2013 at 1:06 AM

I see you are up late as well. Hope you are enjoying your weekend.

September 2, 2013 at 1:08 AM

Not for much longer. :) I did. I hope you did too, Richard!

September 1, 2013 at 1:53 AM

A powerful senryu ablaze with love. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend, Drake. Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poems as well ! Have a blessed wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

September 2, 2013 at 12:38 AM

Hey Leonora!!!! Thank you very much for that! =D I hope you had a great weekend too!

James Marshall Goff

August 31, 2013 at 8:40 AM

3 lines....a world of love within....remarkable!

August 31, 2013 at 9:18 AM

Jimbo!!! =D Thank you so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 30, 2013 at 3:07 PM

- You hit the nail on the head in three lines, Drake.- Well done ! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

August 31, 2013 at 9:17 AM

Hammer down! =D Thanks very much, Anne Lise.

August 30, 2013 at 2:06 PM

Love it, love it. Love you for always commenting on my poems. "History" was for my Prizewinning artist friend. I asked her to do full body portrait of me IF I could afford her fee. She said, Write me a poem, and I will do the portrait. I sat for it in Winter Haven last weekend.

August 30, 2013 at 2:09 PM

That's wonderful!!! Working together and achieving goals together. What a beautiful thing. I'm glad to be able to check your work out. You're a terrific writer. :) I'm very grateful you stopped by here!

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

August 30, 2013 at 12:57 PM

I like the skill in which you wrote this, very good poem my man!!! MC

August 30, 2013 at 2:03 PM

Hey Marquis! Nice to meet you. Many thanks to you for that! :)

August 30, 2013 at 11:07 AM

Excellent way to embrace beautifully penned. Loved always, bl

August 30, 2013 at 12:06 PM

Hey, BL!!! Thanks so much! =D

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2013 at 10:00 AM

awsome final line, with that totally open embrace. Love it.

August 30, 2013 at 12:06 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea. It's all about the embrace. :)

August 30, 2013 at 9:17 AM

So few words, so much said in them :) Love it! Thanks for stopping by & for the feedback :)

August 30, 2013 at 9:32 AM

Hi & you're very welcome. Thank you, also, for stopping by here, Melani. =D

August 30, 2013 at 7:19 AM

Slowly unfolding the crevice of something hidden, only because we refuse to really see.. Enjoyed this too Drake, so many different ways to interpret.. I might be off target lol, I have another analyses too! :)

August 30, 2013 at 7:34 AM

You're certainly not off, Wilma. ;-) I definitely appreciate you coming by here, as usual. =)

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2013 at 4:59 AM

I didn't see your name in the new poems...Was this yesterday? I was busy with cooking for an invite! I CAME LOOKING FOR YOU...and VOILA! New poem...beautiful in every way...enticing, engaging, enigmatic....Am I being effusive? You deserve it! ;) WOW! :)

August 30, 2013 at 6:15 AM

Hi there, Eileen! Yes, it was yesterday. No worries. You stopped by here and I'm grateful for that. Effusive? Yes. You're way too kind. :) Thank you so much.

August 30, 2013 at 2:35 AM

this is what i call the unfolding... a gradual slide that slowly opens , then spreads out like a wide fan ... what a way to express a full embrace!... you nailed it, drake!...:) huggs

August 30, 2013 at 6:13 AM

A strong way to look at it, yes. :) Thank you so very much, Nette. I hope you had a wonderful vacation.

August 29, 2013 at 11:55 PM

Open up I am, Drake

August 30, 2013 at 12:48 AM

Hey there!!! It's been forever & a day! Thanks & great to see you around again!

Richard Lamoureux

August 29, 2013 at 7:01 PM

Can't top the below comments, another exquisite piece.

August 30, 2013 at 12:47 AM

=D Many thanks, Richard! I do appreciate that!

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