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Velvet Whispers

night drapes like v e l v e t, your voice wraps o u r n a d my soul~ like silk PRESSED to skin.

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Lin Lane

Date: 5/9/2025 2:14:00 PM

Billie, I just can't get into these new forms, but this one... you've created it with beauty in words and shape. Thumbs up!

Billie Jama
Date: 5/9/2025 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Lin. It was a fun challenge

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2025 7:52:00 AM

Gorgeous one! Big congrats in Brian's contest

Billie Jama
Date: 5/9/2025 4:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Silent One

Date: 5/8/2025 6:37:00 AM

This is really creative Billie, you have taken the hiku trend to another level here... love the opening and ending to it.. great imagery...

Billie Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, That means a lot coming from a poet like you. I was just playing around with form and texture—so I’m glad it enjoyed.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 5/8/2025 1:31:00 AM

That's so cool! I tried to do a wiggly line in my daisy chain one and it blew my brains and I had to leave it haha. Love this one :)

Billie Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 4:41:00 AM

Thank you for the support and kind words. I am enjoying trying all these new shapes. I've been having a lot of fun making them.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 1:08:00 AM

I find it so clever how you made the word " around" go around in circle! How creative of you sis! And the hiku is so evocative and has a dreamlike quality to it which makes me wanna fave this one! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Billie Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 1:27:00 AM

Awe thanks sis, just having fun playing around with different shapes. I'm glad you liked it.