Velvet Whispers

night drapes like v e l v e t, your voice wraps o u r n a d my soul~ like silk PRESSED to skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 8:20 PM
I love this one. The creativity of it and the romantic imagery of night. Outstanding
Jama Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 1:01 AM
Thank you kindly Andrea. This style of romantic and sensual poetry is my niche. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Lane Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 2:14 PM
Billie, I just can't get into these new forms, but this one... you've created it with beauty in words and shape. Thumbs up!
Jama Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Lin. It was a fun challenge
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Gorgeous one! Big congrats in Brian's contest
Jama Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 4:05 PM
Thanks Andrea
One Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 6:37 AM
This is really creative Billie, you have taken the hiku trend to another level here... love the opening and ending to it.. great imagery...
Jama Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Thank you so much, That means a lot coming from a poet like you. I was just playing around with form and texture—so I’m glad it enjoyed.
Empress Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:08 AM
I find it so clever how you made the word " around" go around in circle! How creative of you sis! And the hiku is so evocative and has a dreamlike quality to it which makes me wanna fave this one! Best wishes! Sending you light always
Jama Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:27 AM
Awe thanks sis, just having fun playing around with different shapes. I'm glad you liked it.
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