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Velvet Tongue

oozing the poisonous liquid of the tendrils which fall from your mouth disguised as words of comfort painful as it bites into my red and seared skin begin again bend that awful truth where deception lies on that drool. drip.. drip... drop!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/4/2009 4:52:00 AM
Pens have been flowing and there are many excellent poems posted today. I have enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2009 1:38:00 PM
I get chills reading this. The imagery is very powerful! Katie
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Date: 9/3/2009 1:28:00 PM
Very expressive. I can hear the lies. Sara
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