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Velvet Paws of Time

When juvenile, it matters not the ticking of the clock. For then, time creeps as if on velvety paws, casting its shadow o'er the earth; but as we mature it appears, as a bird of prey on outstretched wings. Always solemn-faced, talons extended, snuffing life as were it a candle at first light. We know of our beginning, but only God knows of our appointed demise. In the interim, withhold not thanks, for the extension of life each day. For while life's beginning, may come with the glow of a velvety red rose; time, as the noonday sun, will soon render it a pallid pink

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Date: 1/26/2018 10:20:00 PM
Well done, Tom. Enjoyed your poem. Can relate.
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:10:00 AM
Thank-you Tom!Your poem is beautiful and captures what I feel about generations. If you get a moment check out the poem "Wing Shadows" by Cynthia Patience. It took my breath away how very similar your poem is to mine in its message. I think we had the same vision.
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:59:00 AM
Cyntha, i did read your poem 'Wing Shadows" just now and agree. sometimes God puts the same thoughts in many minds where most are allowed to die. Glad you wrote yours down.It is a wonderful poem. Tom
Date: 1/22/2018 3:40:00 PM
Nicely penned piece, Tom...
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