This poem appears in my books: "One of the Guise" and "Ripples"
To be able to admit when your wrong Can only make a love grow strong To be able to give your heart unlatched With no strings attached Will make a love complete Caring, sharing with a laugh (It was good to hear you laugh) Love doesn't blame It doesn't play those foolish games It's the nectar, the ambrosia It burns the cloven flames It bares what God gives of Himself He has a Name above all names Is it a crime to want to seek Paradise The pursuit of happiness in this life? Grab hold of some fantasy and run To a place where two hearts become one Make some time and find that special place Living Coram Deo, before God's face It's not hate here, that leaves scars It's meadows, clouds, rainbows and guitars It's angels, stars and choirs but not a devil's grin It's you and I, it's velvet Just feel the softness against your skin
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