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Veiled Silence

Mourning her lover She wore the black widows weeds Yet remembered when, Life was a dismal affair. Used and bruised like a crushed leaf. penned 26 Sept 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 10:49:00 PM
Wow you really found your muse!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/28/2016 4:17:00 PM
Nah not really... Seren
Date: 9/26/2016 11:59:00 AM
well written, seren; i felt the pain of betrayal... winning wishes if for contest..huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/26/2016 12:48:00 PM
thanks Nette, i have a go at things lol.......Seren
Date: 9/26/2016 11:52:00 AM
fabulous tanka Seren I especially love the final line:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/26/2016 12:48:00 PM
Aww Jan thanks hun.....Seren

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