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Veiled Harmony

I walk garden paths on a beautiful day the leaves float . . . roll cool zephyr undertones murmur harmonic sighs xyst experience joyful nature kaleidoscopes quiet ... veiled ... yielding _______________________ November 2, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/veiled harmoney Copyright Protected, 11-1403-164-02 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Alphabet Soup sponsor, William Kekaula, Judged 11/15/2021 *xyst - a garden walk planted with trees

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/2/2021 9:18:00 AM

Exceptionally well-done, Constance. I found that some of these poem don't seem to make sense. Yours, on the other hand, paints a scene and I could feel you walking there in "joyful nature." Beautiful!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 6:21:00 PM

You're telling me! I tried to write one, but I simply could not get anything to work for me or the requirements. Best wishes for success in the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2021 2:12:00 PM

Milt, thank you for the compliment on my poem and comment, it was surprisingly difficult to write ~ peace and tranquility _Constance