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Veil of Night

veil of night opens 

moist lace swelling on his trunk...

cherry and fragrant



Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku Contest of Sandy Ivy Davis
by nette onclaud

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/20/2013 1:19:00 AM

Love the haiku nette ;}

Kash Poet

Date: 12/30/2012 1:24:00 PM

Hey YOU!!Come Back!!HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/23/2012 11:17:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, sorry for late. It's excellent. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/15/2012 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations ....Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 11/15/2012 12:57:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win my dear friend, Nette! (SM) love/hugs, LG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:29:00 PM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SULTRY LINE OF HAIKU LUV .. FEELING IT..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 4:57:00 PM

some great metaphors going on in this one. It is very good, Nette. Glad to finally see this one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 1:53:00 PM

Nette, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2012 12:03:00 PM

Great work that is in the winners' list..Congrats on your great work..Sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/13/2012 8:31:00 AM

A hot piece indeed, like it, Nette, Congrats!! Jag

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 6:04:00 AM

Hey Nette,Congrats on your win!!Loved it on my first read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:35:00 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/12/2012 10:22:00 PM

Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2012 10:48:00 AM

I agree with Michael below, this write has a passion that flows so perfectly all throughout it! I really enjoyed the heat that this poem creates from the simple words you have written here Nette! The way you wrote this piece is so very exciting and so very powerful, I love it! What a passionate write my good friend, Great Work!!