Kash Poet Poet Rhyme

Vehicle No:11

What a fun
I'm getting tickle,
to write a poem,on
eco-friendly vehicle!

Isn't it better
to write an essay,
old school days
you may say!

Let me try
for a while,
to write a rhyme
in my style!

I have got 
a friendly vehicle,
with some eco-
just miracle!

Some people say
vehicle no:11,
capable of reaching
even to heaven!

I prefer,to
walk on foot,
what a vehicle
simple and cute!

Isn't it friendly
with some eco-,
you people decide
let me go!




© kashinath karmakar (25th May,2011)
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Contest:Eco-friendly vehicle

Sponsor:Robb A. Copp

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Gwendolen Song May 29, 2011 at 3:40 PM Thanks for visiting my eco vehicle poem too, Kash....you like your feeeeeeet....I like my bicycle! Either way, we are eco friendly citizens of the earth! Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song May 28, 2011 at 2:23 PM I love your eco-friendly vehicle!! Work those muscles and walk! Awesome one, Kash. Fun style too. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2011 at 11:51 AM Kash, Soup member Barbara Gorelick just called and I was telling her about this poem. We need more than ever to start walking again. Maybe fuel companies would lower their prices if the demand dropped! Love, Carolyn

Skat A May 26, 2011 at 6:19 AM Karmakar, a wonderful entry. The best of luck~luv*SKAT

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2011 at 7:55 PM thanks for the explanation of 11. I had never heard that before, but I bet some of my american friends already knew it. I'm ok. I have to go really fast.We taped American Idol, and my daugther and grandson are gonna watch it with me in five minutes!

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2011 at 7:32 PM This has some cute lines in it, Kash. What I most liked was when you said, "I prefer to walk on foot, what a vehicle, simple and cute." that was a very unique stanza. Why did you say no. 11? Sorry I did not get that part! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta May 25, 2011 at 6:40 PM Fantastic idea for eco vehicle with wit and humor, kashinath

James Foulk May 25, 2011 at 2:00 PM loved this amusing piece of poetry, good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Just a Lonely Rose

Jack Horne May 25, 2011 at 11:36 AM LOL, good one, Kash. Shanks' Pony, we say over here - no idea why : )

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 25, 2011 at 10:53 AM Ha-ha! Yes, to go "on foot" is to employ the ultimate eco-friendly vehicle, and to keep fit. A witty and funny write. Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.

Carolyn Devonshire May 25, 2011 at 10:02 AM Dear Kash, love your witty poem! Yes, a lot of us are doing more walking now and I think I'm going to buy a bicycle as well. Very creative entry for the contest and I'm sending winning wishes your way! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 25, 2011 at 7:49 AM excellent and cute to boot Kashinath.. good luck in the contest.. great rhyme and I luv the way u laid out this piece ..attention grabber luv.. happy eco friendly vehicle..luv..

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2011 at 1:38 AM i'm soo NOT into this robot-like technology, kashi.. what a naturally fn piece you got.. high winning streaks.. visit me..:)

Kash Poet May 25, 2011 at 1:35 AM I think in near future we have to write on topics like:Electric Arc Furnace,Four Stroke Engine,Light Emitting Diodes etc etc....haha.