Veggie Soup For Hungry Children

Soup tastes better
when its ingredients are veggies
with enough noodles
to give it a tempting look.
All the pasta letters of the alphabet
can be stirred in it until they cook well.
I see some children drool,
watching it with hungry eyes, but seeming cool...
while mom warns them of the hot steam,
" Don't stick your nose in that pot...you'll get burned! "
Finally, the veggie soup is ready...
every bowl is filled to the rim, 
" Yummy ", one says licking his lips.
" Dig in, kids...it's mommy's soup, the best ever! "
She tells them with a thrill that delights them all.
" One thing you've forgotten to say...
what was your letter? " Mine is A, " I yelled.
" Good, boy...I am going to reward with another bowl of soup!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/29/2012 12:49:00 PM
Andrew, belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/26/2012 6:48:00 PM
Andrew,,, ,,, congrats with your A + poem..pd
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Date: 6/25/2012 2:10:00 PM
This makes me smile, dear Andrew.. What a heartwarming bowl of soup!!! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:22:00 PM
loads of congrats on your win ,andrewl :) huggs
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:51:00 AM
Very creative way to do the contest.Excellent write!Congrats Andrew on your win!
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:26:00 AM
So Sweet Andrew! [my fav soup is tomato!]congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:34:00 AM
Wonderful and amusing piece,Andrew..Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Date: 6/23/2012 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nancy's "Alphabet Soup" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:32:00 AM
How charming this is, Andrew. Big congrats!
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Date: 6/22/2012 10:25:00 PM
Love alphabet soup and seeing what wrods can be made. congratulations.
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:42:00 PM
Chow down, then!!! Dredged up some pretty sweet memories for me with this one, Andrew. Thanks for that and thanks for supporting my contest! Namaste~N
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Andrew xx
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Date: 6/19/2012 12:49:00 PM
What a beautiful day and what wonderful poetry I am enjoying reading today. Glad I came across this poem of yours and read it Andrew. Please keep posting so all can enjoy. Love, Carol
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