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Vast

Vast is my love - vast as an ocean with feelings as deep as a sea. Tides rise or fall; waves come and go, but passion flows always from me. Vast is my love - vast as a forest. With you I am always at ease. Moments we've shared are plentiful as the woodland's mighty oak trees. Vast is my love - vast as a desert as our years have drifted like sand. Our time will go on, for you're my oasis and true love our lifetime has spanned. Vast is my love - vast as the sky though cloudy sometimes, mostly clear and sunny are days we have known. Forever I'll love you, my dear. April 20, 2023

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Date: 4/24/2023 4:47:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, it is so beautiful, congratulations !
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Date: 4/23/2023 1:31:00 PM
Andrea, this is so sweet. Thanks for taking us on your intimate journey and congratulations on this V challenge
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Date: 4/23/2023 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Excellent series of images.
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Date: 4/23/2023 12:27:00 PM
Velly velly good stuff Andrea '
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Date: 4/23/2023 9:10:00 AM
Really beautiful sentiments, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Date: 4/23/2023 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Andrea. Wonderful poem
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Date: 4/23/2023 1:42:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your top win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2023 9:06:00 PM
You have very beautifully compared the vastness of love with the vast ocean, vast forest, vast desert, vast sky etc... Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Vast is my love" write. Have a blessed weekend.......
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations Andrea. Hugs
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Date: 4/22/2023 11:54:00 AM
Love the similes Andrea! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/22/2023 9:44:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/22/2023 7:49:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Good use of the chosen word in your well-written write. I echo what Belle said. Congratulations on your top win, it was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/22/2023 4:12:00 AM
Hope there are no storms.
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Date: 4/21/2023 6:53:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea, a vast love like that will always last… Belle
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Date: 4/20/2023 6:31:00 PM
What an excellent dive into the word vast! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/20/2023 1:52:00 PM
Passionately penned, Andrea. A joy to read you today my friend:)
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Date: 4/20/2023 1:44:00 PM
WOW Andrea this is Very beautiful !
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Date: 4/20/2023 1:41:00 PM
I like the sound of love emanating through your words, Andrea. A delightful write--straight from the heart.
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