Vast

Vast is my love - vast as an ocean
with feelings as deep as a sea.
Tides rise or fall; waves come and go,
but passion flows always from me.

Vast is my love - vast as a forest.
With you I am always at ease. 
Moments we've shared are plentiful as
the woodland's mighty oak trees.

Vast is my love - vast as a desert
as our years have drifted like sand.
Our time will go on, for you're my oasis
and true love our lifetime has spanned.

Vast is my love - vast as the sky
though cloudy sometimes, mostly clear
and sunny are days we have known.
Forever I'll love you, my dear.

April 20, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 4:47 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, it is so beautiful, congratulations !
Kaufman Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Andrea, this is so sweet. Thanks for taking us on your intimate journey and congratulations on this V challenge
Drowley Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. Excellent series of images.
Maverick Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Velly velly good stuff Andrea '
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 9:10 AM
Really beautiful sentiments, Andrea, congratulations:)
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Andrea. Wonderful poem
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:42 AM
- A lovely poem, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your top win in the contest :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 9:06 PM
You have very beautifully compared the vastness of love with the vast ocean, vast forest, vast desert, vast sky etc... Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Vast is my love" write. Have a blessed weekend.......
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations Andrea. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Love the similes Andrea! Congratulations on your win! :)
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Hi Andrea, Good use of the chosen word in your well-written write. I echo what Belle said. Congratulations on your top win, it was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Hope there are no storms.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Beautiful Andrea, a vast love like that will always last… Belle
Hawley Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 6:31 PM
What an excellent dive into the word vast! Good luck in the contest.
Turner Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Passionately penned, Andrea. A joy to read you today my friend:)
Boreham Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 1:44 PM
WOW Andrea this is Very beautiful !
Pandit Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 1:41 PM
I like the sound of love emanating through your words, Andrea. A delightful write--straight from the heart.
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